I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Kia Ora Stanley My name is Harlem I go to Paroa school I am in your buddy class for blogging. This has some very interesting facts about orcas like i didn't know that orcas were one of the top predators. Maybe next time you could make the text bigger so it its easier to read and make it so there is less pictures so its less distracting so people can focus more on your information.
Hi Stanley, I'm Emma and I'm a year 8 at paroa school. I enjoyed reading this blog post very much because I love orcas. I also like how you put a bunch of pictures in it as well. To be BTB (Better Than Before) you could make the writing a bit bigger because it is kinda hard to read. Bye
Kia Ora Stanley My name is Harlem I go to Paroa school I am in your buddy class for blogging. This has some very interesting facts about orcas like i didn't know that orcas were one of the top predators. Maybe next time you could make the text bigger so it its easier to read and make it so there is less pictures so its less distracting so people can focus more on your information.
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Hi Stanley, I'm Emma and I'm a year 8 at paroa school.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading this blog post very much because I love orcas.
I also like how you put a bunch of pictures in it as well.
To be BTB (Better Than Before) you could make the writing a bit bigger because it is kinda hard to read. Bye