I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Kia ora Stanley, it's Clara here from Paroa School. I love your plane! It looks really cool in the inside, tho I have no clue what this plane is for or who or what Jean Batten is! So maybe to improve this you could've explained about it and added a caption to make it BTB! Bye
Hi Stanley, Max from Paroa school here.
ReplyDeleteThis looks like a very cool plane. I wish it was real. Maybe next time you can explain why you made this.
Hey Stanley, Mack here from paroa school, i like your post but maybe next time you could explain what it's about and explain who Jean Batten is. :)
ReplyDeleteKia ora Stanley, it's Clara here from Paroa School. I love your plane! It looks really cool in the inside, tho I have no clue what this plane is for or who or what Jean Batten is! So maybe to improve this you could've explained about it and added a caption to make it BTB!
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